Soverney's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Moonlchan - Clock Tower]

I'm surprised you can do bounce that well, good job! :)

Moonlchan responds:

I tried and im very proud of it :)

[Exyl - Barcode Valkyrie]

I remember hearing this in your WIP mix, so glad to see this finished! And as always, it is a classic Exyl banger with pleasant sound design and a quite catchy melody.
Also damn that second half goes crazy.

Now I just need the Egyptian Samurai WIP done and my life will be complete.

Exyl responds:

ayy ye I teased it in the mix, I'm glad you like it man, super thoughtful comment!
as for egyptian samurai... i still got some work to do for that one

[Moonlchan - Back at the dream]

Whoa those are some well sounding instruments, I just found that the crackle was a bit too loud for my tastes, maybe it could have been reduced when the instruments kicked in.

Moonlchan responds:

Yeah youre right I will reduce it a bit next time :)

[Moonlchan - Rainy Jungle]

Love the instruments used in this track, definitely very chill. I would only say that it perhaps gets a bit too repetitive. I would have loved some filter automation, perhaps little ear candy at random parts, stuff like that :)

Moonlchan responds:

Gonna make this more often so I can work on it im trying to get better everytime :)

[Moonlchan - Frozen Days]

I quite like it, good job! :)

Moonlchan responds:

Thank you :)

[Too Soon - NGADM Round 1!]

Damn I am really vibing with this track. I really love the vocals and all of the percussion elements. Maybe it is just me, but I felt like the whole track (expect maybe the end) was just missing like one more instrument or maybe just some more backgrounds effects. Still, really cool track :)

GameBoyFireworks responds:

Thank you for the feedback!

[Yea]

Definitely a very fun track. Maybe it's just me, but a lot of the parts seemed a bit too "boomy" for my liking, I would have focused a bit more on the high end at for example the 0:21 section. That doesn't really seem to be a problem once the synth is fully introduced of course. Good luck in the NGADM, I am your fellow competitor. It's gonna be hard to make something better for sure :)

ZaneLittle responds:

I appreciate the feedback and I look forward to hearing the awesome tunes you come up with!

[4mplitude - Fight!]

This track is pretty damn fun and has quite a unique atmosphere. I do like a lot of the parts here, but my main problem with them would be the repetitiveness. For the off sections and especially for the part between the second and third drop it felt a bit boring to listen to and that is because there wasn't many sounds changing, yes there was a background pluck introduced and some faster drums pulled, but it wasn't enough to change the pace of the part, considering that we already heard it in the beginning. I did want something a bit more out of the build ups, perhaps just an extra riser to build the tension more. I did like the first and last drop, they felt pretty good, just wished that perhaps there was a slight switch in the bass sound or an extra one added in the second one because it feels a bit like a B section of the first drop than a completely different part, which is not always bad of course, it is just my preference. Overall, pretty fun track with some flaws, I just love the idea too much.

4mplitudeMusic responds:

Definitely get you my dude, still learning my arrangements and how to keep tracks interesting, but i really appreciate your feedback nonetheless, glad you liked the idea! :D

[the meme fbi's angelic comeback]

Damn this has some interesting stuff behind it, even if it does feel a bit repetitive. You got a lot of potential.

thememefbi responds:

thank you sovern

[Moonlchan - Final step]

Pretty interesting :)

Moonlchan responds:

Thank you :) Your songs too :D